I'm glad you've listed this as draft 0.5. I love the sentiment but the intended (I think) semantics are lost in the syntax.
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> I believe media is power—
> But only when wielded with integrity.
> I believe technology is leverage—
> But only when grounded in service to others.
When there are clearly those who wield power through media with little integrity, and those who use technology as leverage in the service of themselves.
The way you have worded it means you don't believe this misuse of media or technology is possible, when it is clearly the danger that has prompted your choice to act.
Perhaps you meant a more careful rendering. There are many possibilities, but here's a simple one...
I believe media is power—
It must only be wielded with integrity.
I believe technology is leverage—
It must always be grounded in service to others.
Or make the response lines even more commitment based…
Totally agree with your point "When there are clearly those who wield power through media with little integrity, and those who use technology as leverage in the service of themselves."
I'm glad you've listed this as draft 0.5. I love the sentiment but the intended (I think) semantics are lost in the syntax.
I can't sign up to…
> I believe media is power—
> But only when wielded with integrity.
> I believe technology is leverage—
> But only when grounded in service to others.
When there are clearly those who wield power through media with little integrity, and those who use technology as leverage in the service of themselves.
The way you have worded it means you don't believe this misuse of media or technology is possible, when it is clearly the danger that has prompted your choice to act.
Perhaps you meant a more careful rendering. There are many possibilities, but here's a simple one...
I believe media is power—
It must only be wielded with integrity.
I believe technology is leverage—
It must always be grounded in service to others.
Or make the response lines even more commitment based…
I believe media is power—
I commit to only wielding it with integrity.
etc
Totally agree with your point "When there are clearly those who wield power through media with little integrity, and those who use technology as leverage in the service of themselves."
I’m with you! Let’s go future narrator!
New media brands will definitely emerge from the new producers and narrators :-)
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